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My first love

The story you told me to change about my first love

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  • Sangvinrose
    Sangvinrose
    • 8 年 之前

    Ok I can do that, but I've noticed the contest was over.Are you still interested in mt stories?Thanks!

    • 8 年 之前
    1. alexisrbaker
      竞赛主办者
      • 8 年 之前

      If you are still interested in writing for my website, I'm still interested in reading your submissions. send them to my email though, allie.baker11@gmail.com

      • 8 年 之前
    2. Sangvinrose
      Sangvinrose
      • 8 年 之前

      Yes, I am.I will email my work to you:)Thanks!

      • 8 年 之前
  • alexisrbaker
    竞赛主办者
    • 8 年 之前

    It's a good story but I can't help but feel it would be so much better if written in the present. Get into the shoes of your younger self and write the story like it's happening right now. You could even divide it into several shorts and publish them all individually. I'm open to something like that.

    • 8 年 之前