Writing Content for gay cam / date site home page.

First draft; awaiting feedback

Note: The website looked a little loud, so I’ve opted for a slightly naughty, friendly tone in the first section – which I think will go well with the site’s design. If you want a different tone, do tell me. I can re-write a sample, and if you think that works, I’ll turn in my final draft. If you have any suggestions, please send them via chat, so my competitors can't see them. Also, I haven’t organized the content yet, because I first want to know whether you think I have the tone right. I’ll add some other stuff such as categories (optional), features and a how-to guide, once I’ve heard from you. Awaiting feedback. Priya