Brand my startup business, serving creatives and communities

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  竞赛主办者

  • 8 年 之前

  OK ive looked at the animations, they are in the right direction, however the dots need to be moving around not static. its meant to be exciting! the lonely dot looking around on its own, then finding other dots to connect with. The orange shape sould build slower, growing. Then once grown the whole should be pulsing and alive! Also it is way too small. The graphics should be taking up the whole screen. And youve not fixed the font. i asked for you to fix the font and I asked you to remove the sub tet. not using 'connecting creatives and communities. Please send another version. Also as i said in the otehr note, i could not ope the business card file, needpdf to see. it will need to have the font fixed there too. The graphic needs to be big on the card not tiny. this is a bold design and my business is bold. Also, please change the colour, to a darker orange and more 3D. thanks. I have my event in 16 hours in the morning so need to video finalised for presentation tonight.

  • 8 年 之前
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     TrazoHabil

     • 8 年 之前

     Sorry for not responding, I do not receive notifications when you write me.
     
     The slogan is worded as you requested "Connecting your Community Creatively".
     
     You responded in an inlet the old design.
     
     I would like an idea of the typeface you want to be more precise.
     
     The video could change now, enlarge the logo and slow down the appearance of orange spots. And change the color.
     What is sub tet??
     
     I would like to talk more privately to be more fluid. This writing in different entries confuses me a lot.
     
     You can not send me a private message here?
     
     and once the project is complete, what I need it is to be selected to send the complete package together with their draft code so you can modify them when you wish.
     
     Here Business Card in Pdf : https://mega.co.nz/#!JVMhVRSZ!gPRchxpPpV9sl7QeMvSWplzmQn75JzH43EPT6kL7XwI

     • 8 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 8 年 之前

  oh i just saw the other versions!

  • 8 年 之前
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     TrazoHabil

     • 8 年 之前

     These are personal business cards. I hope you like. . If you want to make some changes, please let me know. Thank you very much for the opportunity. Greetings.
     
     Here: http://bit.ly/1GgZhCz

     • 8 年 之前
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     竞赛主办者

     • 8 年 之前

     Hi Ive tried to open it but i can access that file type, can you send as pdf?

     • 8 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 8 年 之前

  i see that that graphi could take a few forms - be applied in different ways in the different material and the animation. how do you see it translating?

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     竞赛主办者

     • 8 年 之前

     could the animation evolve between them? the interconnecting dots are imporant as they represent the web of people connecting. maybe the web starts first and then they grow the orange blobs which represents their sence of unison and community. the dots could start loos and chaotic and then come together, strengthening connections

     • 8 年 之前
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     TrazoHabil

     • 8 年 之前

     I like your idea and I'll try. But the problem is that the background is the same color as the lines and points. Which will not allow your visibility.
     
     I say this because I read a comment that said that you like this version.
     
     But it could work if the background is black, and lines and points white or the background is white, and lines and points black.

     • 8 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 8 年 之前

  how do you see them animating?

  • 8 年 之前
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     TrazoHabil

     • 8 年 之前

     Great! I would like to show what will be the animation but I see that I can not upload any type of video format to the contest.
     Basically the idea I'm creating is to show how each petal grows and when completed, the points begin to grow randomly, like a flower. Then they will be connected by the root that grows (The lines) .
     
     I wonder if someone could already introduce an animation or also has the same problem as me. I am new to the freelancer.com platform.
     
     By the way, I am working with background, dots and lines black. But if you want to change it, please let me know.

     • 8 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 8 年 之前

  YES! I love that graphic! I had final input on the phrase, and it is now 'Connecting your Community Creatively'

  • 8 年 之前
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     TrazoHabil

     • 8 年 之前

     Thank you so much for responding so fast and your score. I'm glad he likes. Remember, if you want to order some change just tell me. Regards :)

     • 8 年 之前
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     竞赛主办者

     • 8 年 之前

     could we do something interesting with the typography? Also need to change the words to ''Connecting your Community Creatively'. my favorite two versions are when on black having black connecting lines, and white lineswhen on white background. also love the two hugging petals

     • 8 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 8 年 之前

  continuing: also love the two hugging petals.

  • 8 年 之前

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