Write a fictional short story around the 1983 Soviet nuclear false alarm incident

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  竞赛主办者

  • 1 年 之前

  Congrats, you entry wins.
  We'll use your story in our project.
  We'll discuss about changes later, but some initial points for you start thinking:
  - there is a problem about "time". I mean, you mention the time has frozzen, but later you write "there are X minutes left"
  - the story must be more extensive. You could add details in the next sections:
  --> since Petrov and the 2 mens appears in the forest until they reach the sequoia tree
  --> when the two mens convice Petrov to accept
  --> when Petrov backs to the bunker

  • 1 年 之前
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     ZainabM2

     • 1 年 之前

     yes I realise the mistake I made.. I'll make the changes and submit it.

     • 1 年 之前
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  ZainabM2

  • 1 年 之前

  Thanks for selecting my entry!

  • 1 年 之前
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  竞赛主办者

  • 1 年 之前

  Hello.
  Thank you for your entry.
  Good idea. I like some parts.
  Let's works in the other parts if yours story wins.

  • 1 年 之前