I have a 500-600 page PoliSci dissertation, and I need light editing. In general, I just want to know if an educated reader will hit any roadblocks to comprehension in the course of reading, such as unexplained terms or incomplete sentences. Specifically, looking for three things:
1) Ensure the flow of ideas is coherent and there are no egregious grammatical or sentence structure barriers to comprehension. Highlight any major spelling or grammar errors that interfere with your reading.
2) If there are any unclear concepts, please highlight them.
3) Recommend cuts for any superfluous sections in order to reduce length.
I will need this back in about a week, as well, due to deadlines.