Hello,
My name is Ana and I work in a Public Relations and Marketing Agency. As such, I am writing press releases for my clients, coming from various industries, on a daily basis.
After reading your press release, which is flawless when it comes to provision of all the necessary information, I have noticed that it lacks a bit of emotions - currently, it is raw and rigid text, explaining the company's UPS, however, it does not contain the proper "emotion triggers", which will make your target audiences consider using your services. This is essential, especially since you mentioned Huffington Post, whose stories are often filled with emotions and calls to action, and they even have a special section called Huff Good News.
I can provide you with more propositions and some examples regarding the revision of your current press release. Should you have any additional questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I really hope we will collaborate on this project,
Kind regards,
Ana