Developmental Edit of Fiction Manuscript -- 2

I am looking for a qualified developmental editor for my 46,000 word fiction manuscript. This is not a simple copyedit job. Please do not send me a proposal if you are not confident that your work will be of the highest standard. My manuscript must be ready for publication when you complete the job. The following criteria must be satisfied: Pacing and momentum including structure, flow, and clarity -Strong Writing including showing vs. telling, passive voice, clichés, redundancies, adverbs and unnecessary filler words Word choice including initial pronouns and names, sentence starters, homonyms, repetition and overused words Dialogue Strength Grammar, spelling, syntax PLEASE SEND ME A SAMPLE OF YOUR BEFORE AND AFTER DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING IN A RELATIVE FICTION GENRE. THE GENRE OF MY STORY CAN BE BEST DESCRIBED AS PSYCHOLOGICAL THRILLER AND THE STORY WILL REQUIRE A THOROUGH READ BEFORE YOU START WORKING. THERE IS ALSO THE POSSIBILITY THAT THE RIGHT PERSON WILL BE NAMED AS AN EDITOR IN THE PUBLISHED WORK. THANK YOU.