Need editing for a query for young adult fiction novel

Good afternoon. I saw your query listed on Freelancer and would love to take a look through it for you. I work in publishing and often read book proposals and can see a few things that we can change to make your query stand out from the rest. I have graduated with a high 2:1 in English Literature from Exeter University and have worked at a range of publishing houses including HarperCollins and Headline. I currently work for Medina Publishing, where we publish a range of titles including children's and YA. I am an efficient proof-reader and marketing strategist and will be able to help you pitch your story effectively. I would love to talk to you some more about your novel (which sounds right up my street) and please do message me if you have any questions. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Kristina

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native English-speaker (American) and proofreader, ready and willing! estimated TAT would be within 24 hours Thanks for your consideration! To answer the questions raised in the project description, I have never written fiction book queries or anything related to the children's book industry before. The project bid is for the cost to copy edit the text with an emphasis on improving flow and readability.

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Having worked in the publishing industry, as well as being a native English speaker, I could complete this task successfully. I have read through the attached document and at first glance I would suggest a few changes in the first paragraph already. No major changes,but a quick shuffle of words could provide a "smoother and easier" read. Looking forward to your response. Warm regards Fran