I only need a quick proofreading and some tweaks here and there for a Biography/Testimonial of 300 words. It's not the usual corporate biography but it should be more of a story of how she made it to the top despite the odds and disparities.
It is for a pro bono organisation and it should sound encouranging and inspiring for the next generation of lawyers!
Please let me know your thoughts! I am not entirely sure about the paragraph highlighted in red, I think it does not sound really catchy.
How much would this cost? (It's only around 300 words!).