Direct response Marketing

I am a dry cleaner currently using a direct response marketing system that is working for me. I am looking to incorporate a post card along with my current marketing that will move my prospects to take action. I want to create an ad that will make my prospects pick up the phone and call me since other types of advertisement is completely useless. So, Here's what I want the postcard to contain; A Catchy, somewhat quirky headline is ok! Creates interest in my Service Creates a desire in my prospect Has an Expiration date. I would like to do a 3 part post card campaign to the same prospects. Please send me a sample of your work especially if you have ran a successful campaign with a dry cleaner using direct response marketing. Attached is something I did as an example, but quickly realized that I needed help.