Developing a Scholarly Voice, Active Voice and Word Choice

1. Will need for the attached paper, file name is "earlier paper", to be read. Once read, Identify two examples of points made that expressed unsubstantiated opinions. 2. Rewrite both points ensuring that your writing clearly shows critical reflection showing how you arrived at your claims. 3. Then identify two examples of word choices which could be strengthened. 4. Highlight two examples and rewrite a better word or phrase choice in bold. 5. Include a note identifying why the original word choice was weak and how you have improved it. I've attached the complete assignment, file name is "assignment". I've also attached a resource to help with completing the assignment. Thanks