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You're a man – when it comes to jewelry, you want to keep it simple. Necklace? You must be kidding. A ring will do, and none of that posh bullshit. Fine then, here you go mate: the Blackjack Tungsten Ring. Highly polished black tungsten carbide. That's it and you don't need anything else. Black, because gold and silver are for ladies. This is a man's ring and don't let anyone else forget it.
8mm wide and 10.9 grams weight, the perfect size. Compact, generally stays out of the way, but when you need to show a little flash it's there. You're welcome.