Hi, After reading your synopsis I've determined that I could roughly do 2000 words per hour (usually only 1000-1500) as your skills and writing style seemingly flow well! This would be 46 hours altogether, however as it's a fantasy novel (my favourite genre), and the storyline is intriguing, I would probably proof-read, edit, etc, in large stints, say 6-8 hours per stint, 2-3 stints every 48 hours.
This said, I estimate that I could have a the first fully proofread/edited copy back to you at around the 6/7 day mark, which would give us 2/3 days to further work together on making final editing processes, making sure we're both satisfied, etc.
Over the past 2 days I've done two articles/reports, and one website proofread, with excellent feedback. For two of these customers, I'll now work with them quite regularly as they were that satisfied with my work.
If you have any more questions feel free to message me, and I look forward to hearing you, and potentially working for you! :)
Thanks, Anthony.
*Example*: "he could do and be anything that he could imagine, and go anywhere he wanted in the entire universe." .. I'd change this to, "he could do anything that he could imagine, be anything imaginable, and travel endlessly throughout his infinite universe".
P.S. As you like fantasy/fiction novels, if you haven't already, look to Terry Pratchett for inspiration. That man is the absolute god of fiction (he incorporates general societies flaws into his world in an unreal manner).