Need a Sales Page Rewritten in Selling a Product.

I am selling a product on eBay but I need the words to be rewritten to not sound the same as everyone else and be rewritten to sound better then the original. I have the links below of what I need changed. I want the words change enough so if you do copy the words on [login to view URL] it won't read it as the same material. I also need it to be rewritten to sound better then original content. The top link looks the best overall. Here are the links [login to view URL] [login to view URL] [login to view URL]