Rewrite (from existing) 2 email introductions to our new software & app

Hi guys, We have a product that we have been working on for 2 years called iManage, which is now ready and its time to get it marketed and sold! :) I normally write the sales stuff myself (as I designed it) but I can get a bit too 'involved' with the wrong/ too technical a thing, so I need someone to help me :) I have actually already done it but Im not sure if its right and would like to see a second option so I would like some help re writing it to make it more benefits lead to 2 industries, IT support (field engineers) and electricians (both are very similar to each other so I dont mind them being almost identical). but: I DO NOT WANT A SIMPLE ARTICLE SPIN. I need someone to read what I have already written, look at the imanage website ([login to view URL]), understand it and write a benefits sales/ PR piece directed to electricians and IT Companies. Anyone that can turn this round within 24 hours is more likely to get job as it is quite urgent have a look at [login to view URL] for a write up and at [login to view URL] for the website. and I'd like Friendly writing, informative yet concise, not too heavy on the sales talk but it is a sales document that will be used in email campaigns and more - so plenty of calls to action/ try the demo/ see what our customers say. there really is nothing like this on the market at this price - so go for it for me :) :) Thanks very much for taking time to look at this - good luck with your bid :)