Reviewing and editing a book

This job is to review and edit a book. The goal is to make sure that ideas are concise, easy to read and directions are clear to follow. I've included a chapter. See if you can improve the overall flow of ideas. The overall number of pages of the book is 77 pages and has 7 chapters. Strong English composition skills are a must. Skype is a must as we will work together in meeting the deadline. Confidential. ## Deliverables Attached is a chapter. When submitting bid, show how this chapter can be improved.